Around the world

i 17 Extra street

Holon

12.11.10

See the World travel agency
17 First Street
New-York

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Rasputin(think of a more normal name and stop trying to be cute) and I am 22 years old. My family and I are interested in a tour around the U.S. I am very interested in computers, nature and gambling. I have never been to the U.S but I have been to Brazil.

The type of trip I would be interested in should include aspects of nature and gambling. Thus, I would like to visit Nevada, see the Grand Canyon and visit (Las) Vegas. Also, I would(like) to visit San-Francisco, I heard it has a lot of technology centers.

Also(use a different word), I would like to know what the costs for such a trip are. I am looking for a good hotel, but not an expensive one. I would like to receive information on the guide I will receive(phr.). The bus type is also very important, I would like a special tourist bus.

I hope the trip will go as planned, and we can reach all the destinations as intended. I look forward to your reply.

Truly yours,
Rasputin Dawn.

Interesting, as I expected.

(95)

Daphna

Broaden up.

5 Don Herezfelt street
Nationalville
07.04.2010

The station manager
Radio 106.943 FM
15 Garden street
Lakecity

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to(מיותר) regarding the new show production for teenagers. I have an idea for a good show you might like. Here is a summery of my idea.

The show's goal is to broaden teenagers' interests. Except(for) the usual internet and facebook lurking, there are alot of other activities teenagers can do. This show can bring(ww. - present) the most interasting things on the radio. Also, people who praticiapte in activities can come and(ww.) explain about them.

Our generation has a simple problem. All teenagers are bored, very bored. However, they usually sit on the net(phr.) and have a hard time finding new activities. This is where the show comes in. Also, teenagers can meet alot of new (and) interesting people and learn about other subjects too(ww. - as well).

I would like to point out that making(ww.) this show might be problematic. Making it really interasting is not easy(why?). But if it will happen(ww.+gr.) it is going to be a great show. Thank you for reading my idea. I hope you like it.

Yours truely,

Rufert Pole

(80)

Daphna