Alufei Zahal 17
Holon
03.12.09
Ms. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel High School
1 Mota Gur st.
Holon
Dear Ms. Gilat Simon,
Every year High schools send students to praticipate in the Poland expedition, where students fly to Poland and get to expirience the life of jews during World War II from a more personal angle. However, some students are not capable of paying such great amounts of money for this trip, although they really want to go.
I believe the problem is the cost of the trip. The cost is outrageous. I know the trip costs alot of money in general, but I, for one, cannot pay even half of it and my economical state is not as bad as other kids'. They probably don't have money even to pay a fifth for(ww.) it. I think the authorities should pay for most of the trip and show people there is an option to lower the price.
Another problem is the shame. It's really not easy for a person that has economical problems to ask for such agreat assistence for something as big as a trip to Poland. I think that in this case teachers, who know that some students have economical problems, have to ask them directly a few times and maybe even talk with their parents, so they can ensure that they will go(phr. - their participation).
I believe the solution to this problem is simply(ww. - simple), more involvment from the school in each student's economical state and the authorities' envolvment. If they do it, more kids will be able to go on this journey.
I believe the problem is the cost of the trip. The cost is outrageous. I know the trip costs alot of money in general, but I, for one, cannot pay even half of it and my economical state is not as bad as other kids'. They probably don't have money even to pay a fifth for(ww.) it. I think the authorities should pay for most of the trip and show people there is an option to lower the price.
Another problem is the shame. It's really not easy for a person that has economical problems to ask for such agreat assistence for something as big as a trip to Poland. I think that in this case teachers, who know that some students have economical problems, have to ask them directly a few times and maybe even talk with their parents, so they can ensure that they will go(phr. - their participation).
I believe the solution to this problem is simply(ww. - simple), more involvment from the school in each student's economical state and the authorities' envolvment. If they do it, more kids will be able to go on this journey.
I look forward to your replay.
your's truely.
Jerry "Paur" Trompy
Much-much better. Well done!
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Daphna
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