A Helping Hand

30.02.09

Dear Homer,

I have read about your problem and I think I can give you a nice prespective about what I would have done(with my friends) if a new person came to my class with my friends and then I think I can give you a better view about the situation.

This situation is very uncomfterable. You must feel bad when you see the new girl alone and still, you're afraid to talk to her because of your friends.

If it happened in my life, my friends aren't snobish (well most of them) so it would be quite simple and fun. But I think you should think twice before making such a "daring" move.

But(try using other connectors, other than "but", like: "However") if you think your friends are good friends, this could be a great way to see if they are really your freinds(sp.). Do what's in your mind, if there (sp.- they are) your friends, they won't judge you becuase of this. Also, you should try to explain to them your opinion, who knows, maybe she is very nice and fun and they will like her.

Although I gave you plenty of ideas and possible solutions, I hope you decide what is best for you and still don't(not) lose your friends.

Do your best.
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Alex Yenin

This is much-much better, Alex. Well done! (90)

Daphna.