My name is Alexander Yenin, but people call me Alex/Sasha/Shurik and I am 15 years old. I am quite short for my age, I have long hair and I usually wear simple shirts and regular pants.
My main hobbies are playing computer games and surf the internet, listen to music like rock and metal, go out with friends, and most improtent I really like to sleep !
Most of my spare time is used for computer games and also playing with my sister and go out to meet my friends.
Holidays are dedicated for the computer and friends, or if Im lucky I go somewhere interasting.
When Im with my friends, we usually just sit somewhere and start talking and telling jokes etc, or we go to "chevrolet" teenagers dancing club. Another activity i do with my friends is to play Dungeons & Dragons but its usually small groups of friends.
I guess I like meeting alot of friends in school that i dont meet after school, and there are a few teachers I really like and their lessons are very interasting.
I dont like the fact that there are still classmates I feel that dont fit the science class, and I really get upset sometimes, because they can really ruin an entire lesson, and there are some really boring teachers.
I really like English. Its the most amazing subject in the world, but else to that I like physics but i dont like the teacher, so its really annoying. I like math we have a good teacher too, history is really interasting and the teacher is really great so it adds.
Well u just read about the most unexiting life in your life and yet im not bored and still I hope this year not like past years, i will try my best and reach the grade i should recive but im a lazy person and i hope that the teachers will be good and i will enjoy learing.
Alex. this is not so bad, but you'll have to pay attention to gr. errors and run-on sentences. Learn to divide your thoughts into shorter and clearer sentences. Pay attention, also, to capitalization! I need to see real structure in your essay, a real division into 4 paragraphs, which I cannot see here. Finally, you need to work on your last paragraph, rephrase some of it and make it into a concluding paragraph.
Daphna.
Thursday, September 18, 2008
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